The story here is in shorter parts that later will be put together on the page I made for this story to begin with. It was started a somewhat 2 years ago already and had been revived when I started writing it here. Hope you enjoy the read.

From the Anime
Ben-to: New Kingdom Knights 4
Satou rushes fast as he can through the streets, back to the school he is attending and the room that has been the centre of the half-pricing Bento Club. Slipping through corners he passes Monk, who had no time to say what came to his mind, on the school yards and into the building. In the wind the words were left behind while Monk scratched his bold head. “Pervert, what is up, I just saw…”
Satou wasted little time as possible and shot up the stairs barging through the doors. With a crash and a big breath he came to a hold inside and look into the room.
Around the round table sat Yarizui Senpai with her usual blank stare. One could never know what was on her mind. Beside her was Oshiroi with her laptop and candid happy look hiding behind her shiny glasses. It was the moment Shaga saw chance to jump behind the seat of Oshiroi and dug with her hands into the uniform. “Oh come on what colour are you wearing to day”.
“You found your answer, Satou?” Yarizui asks with a tone that states she already knows what the answer was going to be.
“Hmm” Satou didn’t say much and just nodded.
They were being their usual selves and it made Satou smile seeing them all together in this room again. Not to long ago they have been venturing into the neighbouring towns and even took a step into the big city for a book release.
Except it wasn’t entirely like the usual as Satou stood up and saw more faces sitting around the table.
“Hey hello again Satou-san when will we have a change to eat each other again.” The formal greeting came from one of the Orthrus Twins.
-“Nee-san, That might be meaning something else to Hentai-san”
“You might be right Kyou, I am so sorry. But we are after him are we not”
Her twin sister slaps her self on the forehead. “It is okay Nee-san, something like that”
A male voice took over the grins, smiles and conversation. The click of a chair hittng the ground could be herd when a face appeared over hanging over the table. “Heard you got beat up by a ghost.”
It was Nikaidou who was standing up after lounging his chair against the wall. The view was obscured by Oshiroi’s screen and the busty Shaga.
Not long after Satou walked up to the table where his friends and former enemies had gathered.
“It is true I have been seeing a ghost, And I did not get beaten by the ghost.”
Satou started telling the story he had heard from the old man while they drank a warm cup of tea and as the end was nearing Satou made a bold fist.
“I hope you can all lend me hand, to beat the pigs who dare rampage our battle fields and show them what it means to be honourable wolves.”
“FIGHT ON” Shaga screams from the top of her longs and stretched her fist to the centre of the table.
It did not even take another second for the others to follow with a loud howl that stretched out over the school heard into the ears of wolves afar.
To be continued…
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A good read. You describe action briskly not slowing anytthing down. Dialogue is good too. You ended thi in the right place to keep readers curious. Well done.
I do think I let it depends on the action.But to be sure I need to take notice of it lol.
Always good to hear the skills of writing had been sharpened and enjoyed
Thank you for taking the time to read.
My pleasure. Writing is like anything else, the more we write the better we get.