So this weeks prompt at the Reverie was to say what ever I wanted to say in 31 lines. And since I am a big scatter brain I thought I would do something fun. Yes write poetry as my brain perceives it. Okay pretty much how it works all the time, but hope you can see the art and fun in this piece. It is different I will tell you that. Make sure you had some coffee.
Keeping on the right
of my scattered mind
one sets a rule
born in the maze
in genuine storm
scattered in pieces
to art’s completion
into chaotic sparks
given a smile
not making sense
the words falling
the illusive soul
from heights unknown
like drops of rain
at end of tunnel
creating a flow
before blinded eyes
of perpetual headache
to the left side
Want to join in on the fun visit the Reverie. For the prompt and other great poetry.
This was just my take on the prompt and the fun of doing it differently. With a wicked twist. Hope you enjoyed this little puzzle of poetry created by this scattered brain.
Letters like dust fall into place creating a mosaic of words.
Ps. If one did not get the clues. First read all on the right than the left and last read the middle up side down.
I didn’t get the clues, and now I feel like a moron for missing them. This was FANTASTIC! I loved it. How fun and clever!
I could have given the clues a slight italic look but now you got to read it twice 😀 ha ha
I had me a blast doing this idea. And to think it came so easy as well. Just putting them in order was difficult lol.
I am so happy you enjoyed the little maze/puzzle of poetry.
I really did. I would italicize or bold them so others catch on faster. Or else I just really, really need coffee. It’s probably the latter.
does the italic make a difference, I know you now know how to read it!
Coffee always works
I think so. I think it makes that direction more noticeable.
LOL – my scattered mind probably looks a lot like that too! I enjoyed this.
God bless you,
Glad you enjoyed the scattered poetry.
Keep on smiling.
haha! Love Love Love!!!
You make me smile with a comment like that. Happy to see you enjoyed the scattered poetry.
Love the form/structure of the poem. Scattered indeed 😉
Thank you thank you, always great fun trying something new and even better when you see people enjoy it. It gave me an idea for another time as well.
Yes, it is always interesting trying new approaches 🙂
BTW, RC, I sent you an email. Please let me know if you have received it. Thanks!
Is received and will answer soon as possible.
I liked it ☺️ I write like this all the time with different coloured pens too lol
I could ask you next time to colour for me 😀 Though does that not make it a little to easy.
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my scattered writing. Always a pleasure welcoming you
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Very clever! I enjoyed this very much – well done!
Thank you very much.
It makes me smile to know it is enjoyed. Again thank you!
Reblogged this on Annie's Poetry Blog and commented:
Written to the prompt “In-31 Words(Lines)” from The Reverie
Love the idea and the execution of this, just great. I did not get the clues either, but it all makes sense now! Great job!
Well it is okay you got to read it twice 😀
Just happy to hear it is enjoyed.
Thank you for reading and giving this madness a try
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