I love experimenting with short sentences. As done in my next poem.
Wanting to say so much but keeping the use of words at a minimum.
Welcome to your journey…
In submission!
Killing
you softly.
Squeezing
hands around.
Aching
left breathless.
Surrendering
last option.
Exciting
heart pulsing.
Restraint
in submission.
—==@==—
Forced
upon your lips.
Filling
with my breath.
Gasping
back to life.
Rekindled
eyes sparkling.
Offered
trust proven.
Released
in submission.
—==@==—
Unseen
bonds tied.
Warming
in caring arms.
Floating
in tranquil space.
Flying
on My wings.
Descending
from heavens.
Living
in submission.
©Ranting Crow2014
I hope you enjoyed this small read. Not often that I write about this.
Best Wishes
Ranting Crow
Ranting Crow 
No, it is not often that you write of it, but always a joy for me when you do.
I am so glad you are enjoying it. Don’t get lost.
Good stuff Crow 🙂
I wanted to point out the spots I enjoyed most but…LoL It’s beautiful as a whole piece.
Thank you CeeLee I am so happy to see you enjoying it.
And the whole is always better.
🙂
Interesting subject matter. I love the way you used so few words to make such a beautiful point.
Thank you. for the kinds and praising words
I do enjoy the subject just hardly write about it.
I try. And it is fun.