Poetry in a different style this time. Well for me it is.
Read and let me know what you think.
May you enjoy the Lost dance.
From the German 3D Documentary Film, Pina (2011) by Wim Wenders.
Lost Dance
Across wooden Floor
dancing
an ageless example
of love
together with my love
entwined
notes of music flowing
in rhyme
feet, toe to toe stepping
tapping
eyes and mouth closed
enjoying
time is ours, moving
swaying
body exciting, sweating
desires
music slower, light steps
ending
seeing angel feathers
gliding
Eyes burning, flakes shimmer
wavering
Your image dissolving
reaching
Falling to wooden floor
crying
wakeup remembering
my love’s lost dance
©Ranting Crow 2013
One of the poems that came in this style. Poetry from the heart. Hope you enjoyed the new style and the poem in itself. Let me know what you think.
Best wishes
Ranting Crow
Ranting Crow 
Wow! I really like this. There’s a certain rhythm to it — then it breaks, with the one word line. It brings edge to the poem. I totally dig this new style and the content was vivid and spewed profoundness. It promoted an aerial experience.
Great poem. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
Thank you, I am loving it to how the roughness shines through almost like conversation.I think.
Happy to hear you loved it. so it is my pleasure.
…and the photo is AMAZING!
There’s so much passion. It’s on the supernatural level.
Powerful capture.
The Documentary has some great shots. worth to watch if you ask me.
Breath taking in deed.
This is absolutely beautiful. You have a big soft heart.
One dance that we never had to chance of dancing. She haunts me still.
I know. I read about her every Saturday. I’m sorry, Mr Crow. We don’t know what the future holds but I know you told me something a few days ago; We have to look forwards and not live in the past. Keep smiling love.
You write with such passion and beauty and yes you do have a soft heart. Lovely pic.
I write as it flows from the heart and soul. as i do with everything. Thank you. guess there is still a soft spot left