Last part of the steamy Sunday, enjoy.
Our sweaty bodies lingering on the bed rolling and wiggling from position to position. Eating licking, tasting the wetness secreted slowly. Sweet and salty mixed on the tongue. Hands afloat over a thin layer of air across the contours of your body. Drawing circles around your belly button. Watching your breath filling your body making it go up and down. Drops flowing to the sides. Laying an ear to hear your heart beating. Racing fast and hard in harmony with mine.
Sounds of wetness stroking our ears, making our movements wilder, Tension rising when an ending runs near. The windows condensing from the heat our bodies create. Hands squeezing, grabbing tighter. Dragging our bodies to the cold windows. Fingers stroking, petting and rubbing. Stirring in all that dripping wetness.
Leaving impressions of hands hair and body in the drops of water residing on the window cooling our bodies to extend our time. Streams of water distorting the images we made, the tide coming nearer. Feel me hear me take me, I want it, wanting it now, are whispers in our deep animal like growls and breath. Our senses at their peak we prepare for what is coming.
Light reflecting on our glistening bodies. Our back arching, lying there on the floor, eyes closing, grip tightening and lip biting we fight against our upcoming scream that will fill the room with ecstasy, love and pleasure. Nothing stopping us from being as one, our roar makes time stand still. Our bodies like statues, muscles contracting, for that intense moment where everything s out of our control. Fluids running in all directions Our souls united with bodies entwined, we slowly come to our senses, remembering that moment that time stood still. And straight after we fall in each others arms with eyes wide open staring into the souls that say one thing. I love you. With a deep sigh our breaths slowing down, we kiss and lay fulfilled in each others arms. It has been a steamy Sunday.
©Ranting Crow 2013
This was Steamy Sunday in three parts. A small experiment by me to write a lovers story without the use of any gender details. Just to see if it is possible. It has been tough so the parts were short and not sure i covered it all.. But I hope it was a nice read for all who took the time to read it.
So please share any thoughts and make a comment and let me know if you think I done okay. Its even harder to judge this from the writers point of view.
Best wishes
Ranting Crow
Ranting Crow 
it was extremely hot!
Thank you for a well appreciated comment. I had loads of fun writing it. Very happy you enjoyed it.
I never even realized that you wrote it without gender details because your description was so vivid, I could fill in all the blanks myself. Great read!! 🙂
That pleases me to hear. I wanted a read for each sexuality to be able to see themselves. Or That is the idea behind it.
Thank you for the time taken to read and comment
fans self!
Haha bucket of ice? that helps.
Happy to hear it moved you 😀